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Juanalblue's avatar

The first line of one of the paragraphs is missing the word UP I think. I think it's supposed to say, Ashley chose not to bring up Laura's car. But the up fell through the cracks.

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Jack Cameron's avatar

Eleven drafts, three professional editors and things still slip through. Good catch.

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